Wow, Again that was fantasic! I loved it. The flow and rhyming were just perfect. Overall it deserves a 5/5 I think! Keep it up =]

`natalie x-x

I feel the structure could do with a bit of improverment but i like this poem, its well expressed xx

I love your poem!! it is so good!!
i hope that you will keep on wirrting in here so i can keep on reading your work!! keep up the great work!!