by Sarah Ann
Excellent poem, I am really sorry you went through such a thing. Anorexia is definately not a good resort. I have a friend who's life was sadly taken by that sickness. I simply lovee the way you portrayed your thoughts in this poem. Brilliant! keep it up! 5/5 |
by Amanda
It's such a sad poem and if you're going through this I hope you get better soon because anorexia is a killer. You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work and take care :) |
Beautiful and very unique, yet so sad...I can relate in so many ways, I think we have the same friends, Ana and Mia. So hard to live without them, but in the end we will die with them, if we stay friends, right!!! I hope that you one day wil have the strenght to overcome your demons, so that you can live again and be happy!! |
by nightschild
Wow girl |
by Amz
Wow..i love it.. |
by Suri dawn
This is really good!Awsome job!I know how it is...can you read mine?It's: Big Blue Eyes And Long Brown Hair Thankx! |
by Alistair Fin
Always love your poems, good work chucky egg! 5/5 |
by Shaw
Excellent 5/5 |
by Fallen~Tears
WOW.. i really liked this poem.. out of the two this is my favorite.. it was excellent and had a really nice flow!! |
by Carrie
This is really good... it's sad tho... It's best to stay away from ana.. no matter how hard it is... it's poems like this one that keeps me away from ana... great write.. 5/5 |