That was a cool poem! I'm gonna read the next one...next...lol amanda

Woah, great poem! I loved the story line. It was perfect, the flow and everything kept it moving. I will definately read the second one.

Another nice poem!
this poem was as good as the second one

keep it up!

Whoa, dat poem was awesome, you could easily turn it into a song, lol, maybe it is... But yeah i enjoyed it...