What makes me happy

by Krysten   Apr 20, 2006


What makes me happy
and puts a smile on my face
what do i love
what makes my heart race
what can make me smile
even when I'm sad
what will make me fell better
when I'm felling bad
what will always have my love
what will love me back
what will never leave
what will i never lack
what will always be there
when nothing else will
what can take my pain away
what can make me feel
what will be there for me
what will keep me strong
what can i rely on
what keeps me going on
what will protect me
what will see me through
it is not a what
its a who
the person that will
do all of this for me
is the only person
with which i want to be
the only one who holds
the key to my heart
the one that i know
will never ever part
the one who is loyal
and the one who is true
that one person
i found in you

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Though I am not a fan of the repetition at the beginning I think you have penned a wonderful piece. Excellent job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    That's a great thing for being happy and having person that you love...you're poem expressed clearly what's your feeling about..I enjoy reading this a lot. Good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    These words are so deep.pieces like these always runs out of the heart.beautiful piece.i was so eager to find who that person was.great write

  • 16 years ago

    by Syndicate

    Oh, that was such a beautiful poem! By the end of the second line I was completely drawn into what you were saying, I was even reading it aloud. And I never do that unless the poem was really really good. Defiantly one of my favorites. I look forward to reading your other works

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is very sweet.. although i felt the it was a bit forced, the rhym was great in the beginin.. but it changed alot towards the end.. overal the poem is really nice

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