by Kylead
I liked it a bit and i for one am not going to critize anyhow good work 4/5 still have nothing new |
by oldthings
I like it alot. It does tend to usualy be people rather than things that can make you really truly happy. Your poem describes a really basic feeling for a loved one that lots of people share and feel as well. |
by Emma
I really liked it! nice jobb:) |
This poem is very sweet.. although i felt the it was a bit forced, the rhym was great in the beginin.. but it changed alot towards the end.. overal the poem is really nice |
by Syndicate
Oh, that was such a beautiful poem! By the end of the second line I was completely drawn into what you were saying, I was even reading it aloud. And I never do that unless the poem was really really good. Defiantly one of my favorites. I look forward to reading your other works |
by Joseph Boadi
These words are so deep.pieces like these always runs out of the heart.beautiful piece.i was so eager to find who that person was.great write |
by Yrem Crish
That's a great thing for being happy and having person that you love...you're poem expressed clearly what's your feeling about..I enjoy reading this a lot. Good work. |
by BlueJay
Though I am not a fan of the repetition at the beginning I think you have penned a wonderful piece. Excellent job. |