Awe baby, this is such a sad poem=*(

I love how you describe this through the eyes of a child. And the way this child sees it, feels it and thinks.

It's a very powerfull write hun. I loved it. FANTASTIC!

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Awww...thats so touching & sad...
Very well done...it really touched me
Keep writting!!!!
-xxx-

That is so emotional and beautiful, I like the way you made it so frabrent and wonderful n sad at the same time. good job

xxo
love stained sheetz

That is so emotional and beautiful, I like the way you made it so frabrent and wonderful n sad at the same time. good job

xxo
love stained sheetz

Wow
just reading through this makes me want to cry
you've written this really well, asthough you're actually the child
the part about learning to ride a bike is so cute
great jobxxx.