Awh, thats So sad.. I can relate alot i loved it wonderful job..!!

Oh... This is damn sad. I'm sure your mother never thought of you like that... Shoulda, woulda, coulda... Such torturing statements :(

Incredible right!

Wow. That was touching.
Was it true?
You're a really good writer.
Keep it up.

SoccerLova47

Oh this is so sad and beautiful! The heartfelt emotion in this is incredible, wonderful write!

This is so amazingly sad my friend :( Breaks my heart to read something like this Cudds!

Absolutely heartbreaking. I'm not a parent, but if in the future my child ever wrote anything like this it would just kill me. Especially knowing I'm the one who brought her to this....
You convey your feelings with such raw emotion, it brought tears to my eyes. I pray everything works out for you.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Full of sweet sorrw is ure poem

love

R u dead?
but i luved the peom....

Almost, Anna. It's actually a suicidal letter written right before the girl kills herself.*laughs* But you're close.

Oow hun this is soo sad, thank you for your comment meant alot, keep writing and ill keep reading take care sarah x
5/5

Omg that was so sad yet well written...remember, it's never your fault! stay strong!
amanda

Great Poem! I Love it! Thanks 4 the comment on mine!

I think when your mom reads it... she ll be more happy to forgive you... a superb poem.... well written... superb rhyming...