Life vs I

I liked the last stanza of this poem, but the rest didn't really interest me. It was a bit boring and didn't flow very well, you had a good idea and this poem does have potential, but i dont think it was the best one you've written.

--Steph

Another great poem, I really enjoy reading your poem as they are great. your words making me to go and read all of your poems, u are so talanted and keep your best job up.

I looooove this poem. so true. I think this is my favorit one so far. Really. Keep up the great work.

Great topic. Your poem started out kinda weak, then when it reached the 3rd stanza, it became very interesting.

Another familiar feeling delivered well