Its wonderful again Lana!

Im sure you have made the right choice, the feeling in this poem is so right! And im sure you know it is!

Realy beautiful work!

Jon
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That was real good. i can relate partly to wat ur saying. ur rhyme scheme is dynamic

This poem is beautiful! its such a great poem and has a lot of feeling in it, good job

Amanda

Breathtakingly beautiful.... wow... this is absolutely amazing!!!!!
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I so loved it..I can to relate to what ur saying...Beautiful work..~Samantha~

Oh wow your poem is sooo great
theirs alot of meaning and passion
the flow is wicked to
well done
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emmaroo
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