So true.. i loved every word..
nice poem...
5.5
Much Love,
Ipsita

Ye khushiyaan hain jaane ko aati,
fir ye bus yaadein ban jaati.
Jab inme gam ghul jaate hain,
hum khud ko tanha paate hain

beautiful stanza, very well said and so true.
yesterday only i was thinking that its been long since u had posted any hindi poem and m so glad to find it today.
u r a great writer as u always do justice to ur name (Pure Heart)

all the best and take care

Wow i really felt this. 5/5.

Wow! I really loved this one! You're really a very good poet!