The pain inside

by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings   Apr 20, 2006


I wrote him so many notes
And he never wrote me back
Now I'm about to black crack that
My heart feels pulled in two
And there nothing anyone can do
I have no more inner strength
Not even from length too length
He's made me weak in every way
And now in my eyes he's gonna pay
I hurt so bad because of it
And now I hate him for every bit.

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Sara

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  • 18 years ago

    by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings

    Im sorry but I cant do that because what he did was bad and I dont wanna go through all the memories not too be rude or anything

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim

    Yes, if you could add just a little more about him and what he did i think the poem would be evedn better, good job ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brisa

    I liked your poem. it's kind of short though. i think you should add a little bit more detail on what he did to you.xoxo. good work though

  • 18 years ago

    by Autopee

    Accept the fact someone doesn't like you, if not everyone.

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