by Simon Hayes
Great writing... But failing is when you do not persue a dream, find the you! Being teenage doesn't mean you have to fail, or try and fit in with the crowd that make no effort. This is quite enjoyable, made me smile I say that. It's humorous and well written. |
by Laura
Cute poem. I like the topic of this write. It really reminds me of my teenage days....oh how the time has passed since then... |
by Jackie Marie
This is a really cute poem :) It made me smile. It is very well written too. |
That's a lovely poem. I like the rhyme-scheme. I am a fan of abab. It's very nice. It was a very different type of poem, but I really liked it. Good job! |
My how ironic. Certainly made me laugh. You wrote this so subtlely I loved it. |