Wonderful... A unique idea and a unique poem. I wasn't expecting anything like that... Superbly done!

This poem is very different...but i liked that.. i've never read anything like it before. my favorite lines were:
no matter how much red bull i drink
there is no way I'm gonna fly
I loved that! but anyways. Overall the poem was great! 5/5*

I can honestly say I've never read anything like this. It is one of the most intriguing and unique poems I've ever read.
The opening stanza set the perfect mood and completely cracked me up.
Well done...Take care and keep it up~Holly

Very unique poem! I love everything about it, the flow was captivating... Awesome work.. :)

At first I was looking at this in a fashion sense but as the imagery developed I looked beyond the surface of what you were saying. The two words placed like that worked so well because of the contrast. Although the switching from peach to black and back again did begin to wear thin towards the end.

[lostlaureate - come find me]