by Leann Apr 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Sitting crossed legged in the middle of your room |
by Batscout
I want you to know how much I enjoyed your poem. I think everyone has been treated this way at one time or another by a lover. Whether or not this is true, this poem expressed exactly how I have felt in the past. It was very well written and conveyed such feeling, such pain, my heart ached. |
by LadyPearl
Good job. You can still improve your flow. |