by AllHailTheHeartbreaker Apr 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Put thy arms round me |
by Kaylee
I don't think people (your voters) really accept hearing old language in a poem. But I think it was different and fit with the romeo and juliet theme. the () added a nice effect somehow. I can't really explain it but when you read something that you just think stands out then yo know it does. There were a few typos, though, as in missing letters in a word or two. |
by Tara Kay
The words are lovley and sweet and make you feel all starbge inside, i loved it. |
by just a poet
Wow, such lovely words, they really have power and they're just great. really heartfelt. i love it. |