Wow, such lovely words, they really have power and they're just great. really heartfelt. i love it.

The words are lovley and sweet and make you feel all starbge inside, i loved it.
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love Tara-Kay

I don't think people (your voters) really accept hearing old language in a poem. But I think it was different and fit with the romeo and juliet theme. the () added a nice effect somehow. I can't really explain it but when you read something that you just think stands out then yo know it does. There were a few typos, though, as in missing letters in a word or two.