You love her back...

by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X   Apr 20, 2006


A deafening silence fills the air
no words can be said
nothing can erase the hurt
cause the tears have already been shed

i turn to glance at you
and i can't help but stare
it can't be over, you're my world
and now you won't be there

you open your mouth but can't speak
but the look on your face says it all
i know this is killing you too
we've been together through it all

i don't know why your doing this
i don't know why you can't see
beside there's a girl who loves you
and if you looked at her you'd see
you love her back....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Hey love. i like this poem. i like this poem alot. i was particularly impressed with the first two stanzas. i loved the wording and i could feel so much passion in it. i'm on a bit of a writer's block so i value everyone's work a little more, lol. as you can see, my last poem was a while ago. everyday i try to write something, but i never feel its good enough. have you ever had writer's block?

    P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem 'a vampire's curse'. i do love to get comments, especially when they're good, lol.

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