Nice, i liked it. you got your point across.

This poem was good. I could see where you were going with it. And I like the stylye of how you not only match the title to the last line of the poe, but you began and ended the poem in he same way. Good job.
And thanx for the comment on my poem "Goodbye". No, that didn't really happen to me. And I'm glad it didn't! lol I just let me hand do what it wanted, and that's what was produced. :D Thanx again!

Frank