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by Simply Complex Apr 20, 2006 category : Love, romance / lost love
Suddenly the clouds turn gray and the sun disappears The thunder claps and the sky sheds my tears Its time to step down from the pitchers mound See, hes gone for good this time around Well never get back what we once had Its time for me to let go, this is driving me mad And the clouds turn gray and the sun disappears The lighting strikes and the sky sheds my tears Smile as he walks away not showing any pain Once hes gone let the feelings fall like rain And after hes been gone for a while And after the walk thats lasted for miles The sky will open and the sun will appear And the thunder will stop and so will my tears
by Tiller
Great poem Mel I loved it:) You got some talent girl that's all I can say :P lol keep on writing
by Kellerman
That was a great poem
by creeesta
I liked how you used description to and weather as a metaphor of feelings. Good Job! :)