Unbelievable Love

by Simon Hayes   Apr 20, 2006


This love has made me crazy
My heart is racing fast
I'm feeling oh so dizzy
Not sure my heart can last

This whirling pool of madness
Tornado in a storm
Eyes as wide as tunnels
The ice is getting warm

Racing cars are struggling
To keep the pace with me
Fighter jets and aeroplanes
Aren't fast enough you see

This love has got me crazy
Like a bull in a china shop
Never want this love to end
Don't think it will ever stop

This love is better than anything
The world could ever believe
Better than a hundred men
In love could ever achieve

© Simon Hayes 20/04/06

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michele

    Not much to say cuz ya already heard all before, YOU KNOW YOUR GREAT!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very nice! Love can be so many things and this poem conveys that beautifully.
    I adore the second stanza, just brilliant! Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    I love the words you chose to describe your feelings of love..... the rhyme and flow are perfect, a beautiful write SiE. Not many find this kind of love, I'm glad you have!!

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Powerful, passionate and heartfelt. Once again your talent shines. Beautifully done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Thanks Katie... I appreciate that. I was so tired last night when I submitted it I didn\'t actually read it thoroughly to notice that. I have amended that line now :)

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