Comments : Unbelievable Love

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    As usual amazing poem.i love the imagery. amazing job

  • 18 years ago

    by erely

    I remember feeling like this...you said it very well....good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wonderfully written. True love is hard to find and sometimes even harder to maintain...
    The feelings you have expressed here show that love is out there and you may find it when least expected!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Wonderful poem, really showed how your love made you feel, I am glad you found true love...

    One thing I noticed was in the first stanza

    "This love has made me crazy
    My heart is racing fast
    I'm ever so dizzy
    Not sure my heart can last"

    The third line seems to sound like its one syllable short perhaps you could add something like "I am ever so dizzy" or "I'm really oh so dizzy" just I think that makes it flow better

    But that is just me nit picking!!!!!!

    Brilliant poem, I really enjoyed reading it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Thanks Katie... I appreciate that. I was so tired last night when I submitted it I didn\'t actually read it thoroughly to notice that. I have amended that line now :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Powerful, passionate and heartfelt. Once again your talent shines. Beautifully done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    I love the words you chose to describe your feelings of love..... the rhyme and flow are perfect, a beautiful write SiE. Not many find this kind of love, I'm glad you have!!

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very nice! Love can be so many things and this poem conveys that beautifully.
    I adore the second stanza, just brilliant! Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Michele

    Not much to say cuz ya already heard all before, YOU KNOW YOUR GREAT!