by ├Truely_Spoken┤ Apr 21, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
© Francisco Guzman 2006 |
by Esther
Experiance and imagination co-incide, to have a lot of experiance in sad things makes you more open to imagine them!! |
by Esther
I really thought it was quite good but i thought that u probably have to have exprianced a loss of a child 2 fully understand it! |
It came off where it could be taken for many other meanings and not just the one you portrayed. Nice flow and words with the imagery of the metaphors. Really it had been something good but not exactly one that I was interested in during the middle. Strong beginning and ending. |
by Lyn
My goodness!YES YES YES! I did know this was a baby talking to its mother.A wonderful poem. I have only just discovered your writing. I will be reading much more. You are a very talented writer. If you are interested I have written two about abortion."Is This What God Has Willed" and "Situational Ethics" |
by Olfat
Great poem. very nice penned |