Hey sweetie, i thought ur poem was good. I know how you feel,im 19 but my father is really strict and does not approve of the man i wanna be with and love so i rarely see him. My advice to you is not to give up, if you really care about this person then dont give up. Follow your heart. You know who is right for you and nobody else.4/5

Great poem, all I can say is good luck with your relationship with this guy, I really do hope things turn out alright!