Came then Left

Aw that was so sad! I liked the way you wrote it though, it was very interesting to read, and even though it didn't rhyme it flowed really well, great work!

--Steph

P.s. In the title, it should be "then" instead of "than"

Oh one more thing.. "Came Th(e)n Left"

It's not "Than".. I just realized it.

Hmm, another poem about cutting. Original? I think not. Umm, if you want to write about a topic that is constantly discussed, at least try to be more creative? Try to look at it from a different point of view. That's my suggestion.

Juls, wow. Was this kind of based on a non-fiction event?? If it wasn`t you sure made it sound convincing.
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Wow this poem was fantastic...very unique style of writing... but i must say i totally loved it...keep up the good work...im sure to continue readin ur poetry.