Butterflies and Sparkled Hearts

by Sarah Ann   Apr 21, 2006


The words are slightly breaking
As the tears fall from my eyes
My heart is filled with sadness
My face; shamed with disguise

Yes, the burden is terribly heavy
And it weighs down upon my skin,
Butterflies and sparkled hearts
Are things my soul can't win

((This was supposed to be short and to the point. I guess I am just trying to pass the common statement that love will never work for me. Yes. That was exactly where I was going. Eh, don't know if I was there or not, but yeah. lol I write too much. I know.))

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Wow this was great!!! you did an awesome job getting it "short and to the point" im not exactly that good at that. Wonderfully Done 5/5 PS. i dont think your poems need punctuation and i think its great just the way it is... the way you made it. -Jen-

  • 18 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Wow although it was short it was very amazing! I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Another wonderful poem from you. I loved the way it's short and straight to the point. I can relate to this one also and even though it's short, there's alot of information in it. keep up the great work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Its quality not quantity and this oozes quality...very sad but I loved the rhyme. There is a love out there for everyone you just have to look in the right places..

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    Awesome poem. Love the way it is written and it was defenitely to the point. Very nice.

    ~Brooke

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