Wow.
There's so much strength in that....
You say at then end that you're more afraid to stay...well think of the reasons that stopped you the other times(I'm not sure if you're talking about you there,lol)
Great Poem. I love it!
Keep writting !!
-xxxxx-

Wow this poem is amazing, i know how you feel, we've all been there, but you need to hold on girl... life sucks so much but theres always something to live for. i'm only living for my 3year old sister and my 2month old brother, i dont want them to grow up missing an older sister because i commited suicide i dont want them ever to have to say that. find something to live for, even if its small, and cuttings hard to stop, i know i'm fighting that battle too, so far i'm losing but i'mnot goin to give up hope, if you ever ever need to talk i will always listen, sometimes being able to talk helps. ! never give up hope! -hayley

This is such a great poem.. very word had such meaning to it.. i now how this feels like and i feel it too.. but everyone has things in life that make it complicated to live but everyone deals.. i know i have a hard time cuz recently my private notebook.. which is mostly about this one kid i love.. was stolen by that kid and he read it.. well excellent job! 5/5

Very good

OMG this poem is just perfect!!!! I dunno if it's about u, but if it's not, it's certainly well faked...! we've practically all been through a suicidal phase, and if we're lucky we get through it... well i dunno how, but i did manage to get out of a cycle which was like "sad-depressed-suicidal-but then sth happens and evrythin's ok-and then again sad...etc etc" i don't deny that i DO feel depressed from times to times, but not till suicide...! anyway, i just hope u'll manage to find the right people who will divert u and forget about suicide or anything like it.... keep hoping for a happier, idealistic world (if that's what u want), and most of all, keep dreaming...! i still a-d-o-r-e ur poem, it's great, amazing. i loved it mostly the 2 last lines....xXx

Excellent...excellent poem I loved it, I loved how you put diffrent ways of commiting suicide in this poem, very creative and in that little poem you covered so much.

Great poem, i know how it feels to be this girl, so afraid to be here but also afriad the kill herself!
great work keep it up
mel

This was cool. Written very nicely. It was truly amazing with the words that portrayed it quite well.
~Fallen

Great poem...but i can only hope that it isn't true and if it is then i only offer hope that its not. anyway great job keep it up!~valerie

Such a strong peice, has a fantastic flow and content. no actually the content is past fantastic... but cannot think of a word for it. great peice, very expressive and well written

AMAZING!!!! Great job. I loved it. 5/5 I think ur a great writer! Ur poems r great!!! Keep up the amazing job!!!!!

Jess

This poem holds a lot of meaning into it and strength , you did an amazing job once again! ~ Christina

Hey huni hope ya don't mind i added you to my favourites cuz i really like ya poems
kisses n hugs
mimi
xxx

Wow that's a strong poem filled with emotion and I love the end. Everyone feels like that sometimes I think.~Red

Wow. Another 5/5. Great poem!