Autumn in my heart:

by ECILA ice   Apr 21, 2006


Leaves (dreams) falling one by one
Loosen the grip on the stem (heart)
Those dry leaves carried by the wind (life)
Just bear without knowing where to go
Scattered all over the ground
Brown... has no sign of hope
Crashed without any chance to fight
Struggling yet dump in agony

Meekness on each petal (love)
Purely red yet beyond are blue
Young and gorgeous slowly wither
The blooms suddenly turn to never
The sweet nectar I thought would endure
Turn to bitterness of pain and melancholy
The fumes registered also vanished
Nil\'s left for me but only thorns (aches)

Devoted and showered with so much attention (love)
I thought I can keep it forever
But merely reality leads me that there\'s no forever
I lost everything in my heart
The exquisiteness that I don\'t know how to restore
Even the land (hope) dried up and everything expire
Wished someone may revive the damage you have done
And bring the spring in my heart that was once gone

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  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Truly great description and my favorite stanza was first 5/5

  • The words were put together so perfectly!
    the entire peice flowed together so seamlessly and wow, it was awesome. and thanks for the comment on mine too.
    but really, this piece was amazing! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This is such a breathtaking piece. Each line, another stroke upon a beautiful canvas. Just wow!
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I loved it, I know how bad the feeling is. :( but good stuff. :)