by Amberinaa Apr 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the land of make believe |
by Deana
I just can`t tell you how good I think you are, beautiful! |
by rachel
This was a great poem. the concept was creative and the lines flowed nicely. great job and thanks for the comment. |
by Amy
This is my fave so far from you. Simple && short. I like the concept of it and the ending. |
Indeed it makes you think and consider many ins nad outs of a perfect place and exactly how much oppurtunity there may be. |
Nice concept and good flow! |