This poem really made me think. I have times were i feel like the words you have written here.
When i am getting down i just look forwar to the next day in hopes when i wake these feelings have despersed.

Sinful acts of anger and hate,
leave bodies at heaven's gate.
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this was just awesome!!!!!!!!
I really liked this poem its so touching and gr8, heartfelt..nicely written!
Hope you're Okay =)
Luv
NemO XxXxXxXxXxX

Wonderful write as always Darien... Very deep and eye opening. Enjoyable work :)

WOW, deep and dark... a wonderful write Sweets. I think there are times when most people can say they have felt this way.

The rhyme and flow is perfect, just one little thing 5th stanza 3rd line "in" should be "is" a little typo.

Once again, you have amazed me with your writing.... truly a wonderful piece. Keep up the awesome work.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)

Oooh, I like this. It's so dark and wicked, quite an intriguing read.

"My eyes are shallow lit by fire,
aura filled with darkest desire.
Hatred can you hear my voice?
now sing your songs of rejoice."

I love that stanza...just wow! Take care and keep it up~Holly

Ok, that poem was really good, as of late I've been feeling those same feelings... I hope things are looking up though.

Very dark and mysterious 0_o Your wording was perfect and really set the scenery for the imagination! Great work and I look foreward to reading more from you!

Dark and daring! Every word had a place and the overall effect was overwhelming. The pace and tone of this thrilled me to the bone. You are a talented poet....I will be back for more...keep writing....

[lost_laureate - come find me]

I lvoe it how the poem flows so freely and yet you can rhyme it so well

keep it up

XoX *~CrImSon__TeArS~*

I love reading love poems and poems about being happy and living a nice life.... but still the style and depth that the poem goes into really caught my attention... great job!

**meggie**

Wonderful poem... It rhymes so well... You've expressed the emotions so nicely!

Another great job! It had a very deep feeling to it! 5/5 Keep up the great work!

The darkness showed me fate,

I think you mean 'my' there sweet heart.
This is a really excellent poem. You're a great writer. I'm not sure what to say; it was just an amazing job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

And thank you for your help.. I didn't realize I'd mistaken on the Ottava Rima, for I miss took how to write it. Sorry about that.. But thanks. =)

You are an amzing poet!!! 5/5

Ok... didn't compleatly understand the poem. but it was short and i like short poems, straight to the point :D verry good!

"The hour has come and gone,
blood red skies signal dawn.
Demons hunting now finished,
my soul will slowly diminish."

Just amazing. Especially that stanza.
I don't even have the words to describe this, lol. It's definitely one of my faves by you!
5/5
*Gem*