In all honesty - I liked this, you arent into the whole rhyming thing, but you have a unique structure... very nice.

Godbless

Sammib

This is very nicely done and i like the emotion in it but it should be under rape stories (explict)
anyway well done
xxxxx
emma
xxxx

Omg...that was so..wow..you made me feel your pain in ever word..amazing...

innocent crybaby*

Hey, omg gurl, this poem touched me deep down inside cuz that happend to me but I was lucky enough not to get pregnant, it was real emotional, i love it, keep writing.
always jennifer