Comments : Speaking.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Aww beautiful!! keep up the phenomenal work.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    WOw this is awesome lana, realy amazing, i could never write like this with the repeptition of "and".

    Wonderful work, and it ends so well too!

    Well done

    Jon
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ella

    This is the cutest poem