Gr8 feelings
.............aha

I love this poem. I'm going through the same thing right now...only i haven't found a way to look on the brightside yet. So yeah keep writing, your very good at it.

Colton. That was Excellent. The way you expressed each emotive through your language, it was like listening to the most depressing story ever. Simply great use of detail and atmospheric terms, you truly are what we call 'A Poet'. Well done and continue writing the way you do; the extent of your imagination can NEVER be underestimated. Sheer Brilliance.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

P.S: I VERY rarley leave long comments for people, and when I leave a 'P.S', thats usually because I quote something from their poem and express how much I liked it. But, I can't do that here. Because each and every word in your poem was phenomenal. Well done =D.

Wow this was amazing u have talent...keep it up lvoe dia mwaz xoxo

Very good..thats wonderfull ..i hope u rly keep writin i love ur poems they r Great ...so keep this up...5/5..

Hey thats a great poem! i think this i my fave one of urs that ive read so far!
~!ugly & unloved!~

Great poem 5/5

Very sad, nice flow and i loved it
nice
~HazE