Wow Eraklis, another amazing piece. Strong yet beautiful, touching, painful, this is an absolutely wonderful piece, definitely in the top three of all the poems I have ever read on the site. Brilliant Job......see this poem is a prime example of why you should write more! Keep it up, and if you do, Publish. Once again, Great Work!

Yeah! I love this!!! 5/5!!

So so so gooood, you will go far!

Ok... didn't compleatly understand the poem. but it was short and i like short poems, straight to the point :D verry good!