This is so true....Great Job!!!

Great poem, well done
xxxxxx

What a brilliant poem, This is the best poem I have read in a long time, keep them coming and take care Sarah. x

This is just the way i feel!! It seemed so true!! I wouldnt change a thing!! I read your poems and they all seem very creative and heart felt!! Never quit writing!!! Well Done!!!

But my life isn't harder,
than any of yours.
We all have our problems,
that we have to endure.

We all have good times,
and times where we slip.
We all have some issues,
in life's long, tiring trip.

this is very true!!! L0ve it so much we all have problems and we will all get over them and move on...i love it a lot though..

I really don't like reading cuz' in place of because but that could just be me. Also, the ending felt a bit more psa type. Maybe go into detail instead of jst coming right out and saying it. Someimes people want to imagine and get something instead of just being told.

Great poem with a great message. That is the reason why I write, to cope with life and all the crap it dishes out everyday. No I am not starving, and I have a roof over my head, but the emotional demons are stalkers of my waking and sleeping worlds, so I know what it is life to write to free yourself of emotion, or sometimes to help yourself understand what you feeling and why.

-Tainted

Really good work! alot of people can really relate to this!! nice job!

"in life's long, tiring trip."
amazing.
thats that.
5/5

It was so good until at the end it broke off.
I was like..damn.
Anyway still 5/5
~WIngs