I love how your poem cute the shyt and get stright to the point..EXCELLENT..love it..keep it up and do the world a favor.....DONT EVER STOP WRITING> |
Really great poem, i can relate hope everythings ok luv maddy |
Watch out for the "e" on more otherwise this was an awesome piece of poetry!! |
by Avellana
Very detailed. I cold imagine it like a play in my head. |
by Ripple
Wow i really love this poem its gr8. thanks for commentin on my poem means a lot .. all my lovexxxxxxxxx |
by Lexi
Wow this is a good poem i really liked it!! |
I love this one. Excellent rhyming and the rhymes arn't forced. 5/5 |
Hey thanx 4 ur comment on mi poem, great poem, 5/5, luved this bit |