Comments : Captured Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I love how your poem cute the shyt and get stright to the point..EXCELLENT..love it..keep it up and do the world a favor.....DONT EVER STOP WRITING>

    Lissa :)

  • Really great poem, i can relate hope everythings ok luv maddy

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Watch out for the "e" on more otherwise this was an awesome piece of poetry!!

    I sense a bit of animal rights coming through and even a quite celestial feel. It left me in awe literally....on reading it...i liked it....

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Very detailed. I cold imagine it like a play in my head.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ripple

    Wow i really love this poem its gr8. thanks for commentin on my poem means a lot .. all my lovexxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexi

    Wow this is a good poem i really liked it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I love this one. Excellent rhyming and the rhymes arn't forced. 5/5

  • Hey thanx 4 ur comment on mi poem, great poem, 5/5, luved this bit
    Caught behind the golden bars
    An angel ruined showing scars
    keep up your great work, mel