by Sole Apr 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
An understatement of confusion |
by Biscuit
The rhyming in this is great, ands theres some good imagery to, very well writen, i lke it :) xx |
I like the switch up on the last stanza. Great writing. Keep it up. |
by azlan26
OK here is your challenge |
by Sean Dohr
The flow of this poem is what drew my attention. Meaning was there and a message was sent. You're a great writer!!! |
by LuvMeAlwayz
Flows perfectly, good poem |