Fate

by just a poet   Apr 21, 2006


A girl runs out of a house,
tears streaming down her face,
At home she is hurt,
not physically but her heart aches,
at school she is but a zombie,
doing what is asked of her,
ignoring the taunts,
hiding the tears.

slowly her confidence is lost,
slowly her individuality drowns in pain,
she becomes a mere Shadow,
she looses her soul.

this girl will end up,
dying inside,
loosing the will to live,
crying herself to sleep,
she will be but flesh nd bones,
her heart a mere pumping muscle.

this girl is me,
and this is my fate,
this is what i shall become,
at the hands of my torturers,
the people i used to call friends,
and the people i still call family.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Again... I once felt the feelings you express here.... but, the feelings are not forever... and one day you'll put these feelings behind you and only seldom will you think about these feelings... they will be your past... and you would be a beautiful women ready to conquer the world! =) So GOOD LUCK... and remember it's not forever. =) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amadeous

    I like it. nice use of words. you really conveied that ur empty inside and feel nothin. im sorry that u fell the same as i do if u have msn mine is barron_344@hotmail.com if u wanna talk but great poem
    thx for commenting on my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Datz soo saddd... :( hehe... but rilly good! keep up the good work!
    jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Pretty good
    I like your words
    maybe you can write an inspirational poem
    Giving hope to everyone out there and her gettin back up...
    My poem was dedicated to Christina not Katie,
    katie didnt break up wit me
    If you read it again
    you see i did "" to some words
    Cause those are the exact same words christina said to me..
    i said i love christina..but its not like
    it usto be..it will never be like it usto be
    but some parts of me still miss her thats all...

    ttyl
    great poem
    5/5
    peace
    ~TPOMH~

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