Pretty good
I like your words
maybe you can write an inspirational poem
Giving hope to everyone out there and her gettin back up...
My poem was dedicated to Christina not Katie,
katie didnt break up wit me
If you read it again
you see i did "" to some words
Cause those are the exact same words christina said to me..
i said i love christina..but its not like
it usto be..it will never be like it usto be
but some parts of me still miss her thats all...

ttyl
great poem
5/5
peace
~TPOMH~

Datz soo saddd... :( hehe... but rilly good! keep up the good work!
jessy

I like it. nice use of words. you really conveied that ur empty inside and feel nothin. im sorry that u fell the same as i do if u have msn mine is barron_344@hotmail.com if u wanna talk but great poem
thx for commenting on my poems

Again... I once felt the feelings you express here.... but, the feelings are not forever... and one day you'll put these feelings behind you and only seldom will you think about these feelings... they will be your past... and you would be a beautiful women ready to conquer the world! =) So GOOD LUCK... and remember it's not forever. =) 5/5