Very nice poem....a little long...but i liked it!...very nice! 5/5!
~*Linz*~

Wow, great poem. I loved it. The words fit together so nicely. It was very sweet and well penned. I am off to the second part. Keep it up! 5/5

Amazing. It had a nice rhythm, and what I love about this poem is it makes you keep thinking after you read it. I can't wait to read part two. You had some great stanzas in there! Great Job.

Thanks for the comments on my poems, they are well appreciated.