Wow, lovely poem and so much description. no rhyme yet it still flows, my favourite type of poem. so much emotion in it yet with so many simple words. i hope tp one day experiance this love. take care. 5/5

That poem was sooo Sweet
and i definetly love the Ending
Fantastic Job
Excellent
Thank you so much for your comment
I appreciate it
I sha'll be reading more of your work
Great job once agan
5/5
~TPOMH~

Nice poem it had a lot of emotion to it ur a great writer cuz u put emotion to ur poems so keep it up i give a 5/5 ^.^

Nice poem it had a lot of emotion to it ur a great writer cuz u put emotion to ur poems so keep it up i give a 5/5 ^.^