A different situation

by Finalgravedigger   Apr 22, 2006


Usually a fighter of life.
Usually the one to take action. Usually there to help a friend in need.
But now hes not the usual as he sees his friend falling wiht hands grasping towards him crying for help.
He stands not knowing what to do .
He stands there so confused.
He stands wishing for knowledge of how to deal with emotions.
Not knowing how to deal with his own, has to entangle with someone
elses.
The clock ticks and he knows he must make his move soon and knows their is no help from anyone else.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Faceless Mirror

    5^ I agree with Mona. I liked the first lines and it's original.

    Keep it up. :-)

    -Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror

  • 18 years ago

    by Life Sucks!

    Thanks for commenting mine!
    This poem is awesome....... I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alicia

    Well I think all the other comments said it for me, so i'm just gonna say well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by melissa

    Your a great writer. i think alot of people can relate to feeling so helpless

  • 19 years ago

    by Mona

    Fantastic!

    I loved it. First few phrases "usually he's ..."
    And then the twist "But now"

    That's really awesome.

    The end is a bit mysterious. Because the question in my head was "well what's he gonna do?"
    And you leave that question for the reader to answer.

    ^^ Not something you see often.

    Very unique. Very well done.

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

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