If

by LuvMeAlwayz   Apr 22, 2006


If you love me
Love me well
If you don't
It's better to tell

If you break my hearts
And take control
My heart will sink
and so will my soul

If you lied to me
For now and eternity
I don't ever think
That you'll find true love in me

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  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Gd poem, nice and short but i'd only give it a 4, it lacks emotion and seems to be very detached maybe you coulod develpe it a little?

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I liked the rhyme and structure.

    But it could be more emotional..didn't connect very well with me.

    Still nice stuff...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Katz

    Good poem, nice and short

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