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by Katz
Good poem, nice and short
by lost_laureate
I liked the rhyme and structure. But it could be more emotional..didn't connect very well with me. Still nice stuff... [lostlaureate - come find me]
by just a poet
Gd poem, nice and short but i'd only give it a 4, it lacks emotion and seems to be very detached maybe you coulod develpe it a little?