Tears of Pain

by Melanie   Apr 22, 2006


You're good at hiding the way you feel
You act likewhat you're going through isn't a big deal
You know that you have to be strong, but you don't know if you can hold out for that long
You just want to be alone
Your heart feels so broken and torn
You just want to get away
You feel your life slipping every day
Every chance you get you cry, and ask yourself the question 'Why?'
You wonder why this is happening to you
It must be a dream
It just can't be true
You feel like prayer isn't enough
What you're going through now is really tough
You just want to dissapear
Your pain comes out in the form of a tear

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brenda

    I think this is a very well written poem! I can't wait to read the rest of your poems. Excellent job. Keep it up!

    ~Brenda

  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    Very expressive
    emotions flowing
    keep it up
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brillaint peice, very strong with some great expression. well written overall.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    THAT WAS GREAT, AND FOR THE FIRST POEM I THOUGHT IT WAS EXCELLENT
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  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    I am in love with this poem! it shows so much emotion and flows really well. Great work 5/5

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