This was really good!! I loved it 5/5
Keep it up =]

`natalie xx

All you have is one thing to fix..

"Not know why they hurt you
Why you feel this why"

This poem seems to highlight the innocence in ignorance
So sad and beautiful, I loved it

Wow.. that is really good.. its very expressive and I love the way that you described everything on this. You did a great job and it's something I'm sure that many people can relate to. Great job on this!