by Lying To Live Apr 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I hear you calling my name |
by Fallen~Tears
I though it was really good .. the only thing i thought might be off was the rhyming scheme was a little off but other than that it was excellent 5/5 |
by nightschild
Another sad but excellent poem.. |
by Amanda
I hope you get through this ok. It made me cry this poem, that's for sure Look after yourself and i'm praying for you that you will get better soon. I hope you're ok :) |
by Sarah Ann
OMG no hun...please do not consider it as your bestfriend. This really affected me and this poem made me cry. It is such an evil sickness. Ana does not care about you trust me, it is the worst backstabber in history...Listen, if you are really asking for help, PM me or get intouch with me. I would love to help you. My best friend died from ana. My real best friend. She friggin collapsed in the street one night...it's true. Till this day I am not over it. That night was in January. Please, be careful with yourself. Your writing skills are great and you are absolutely brilliant, but I really hope these thoughts you penned aren't really becoming your actions. Take care. 5/5 |
I think i understand this poem, and who ana is from what tainted mikochan said, and if what im thinking is right, i agree with him, dont go down that path.....please comment on my poem let it bleed or the girl, thank u=) luv n light courtz.xoxo |