This is vey powerfully written, very expressive and full of clear description. the flow and rhyme are very good with nosign of been forced. the content though is defantly the best part of the peice, it is all brilliant thoughout with no parts been weaker or stronger than anyother.

5/5

(there is a site erorr near the end which you may like to edit btw)

Aw Wow, This is really good. Really deep to. I hope you don't really turn to ana, If you ever need to talk, Just get me on msn kay? Keep up the great work!! 5/5

`natalie xx

Omg that is terrific writing...i love the outcome it all works really well nd it tells a gr8 story....great work...xox

This is a very good poem! I really like it. I hope you are not really going through this. If so, if you ever need to talk, I am here!!!!!!!!!!! Hey can you do me a favor and r/r/c on my new poem called Just a Few Questions?
It would mean a whole lot..

It's like you're writing about me, this is amazingly gorgeously brilliant, you put ana into words very well, i've written many poems about her, but this is better i think. the best ana poem i have read!!

well done

stay strong sweetie

lonelynow xxx

That's the problem with Ana, she gives you the gift of beauty, but then kills you before you can enjoy it. Sh takes away your life, and once your dead people won't remember how beautiful you were. They will remember that you were another victum of Ana, that she killed you and you watched it happen.

-Tainted Mikochan

Ana was my friend too, but she made me sick, she made me sad and lonely. In the end I would never be pretty b/c I was never thin enough for her. She is not the friend you want baby, she is mean in the end.

-Tainted

I think i understand this poem, and who ana is from what tainted mikochan said, and if what im thinking is right, i agree with him, dont go down that path.....please comment on my poem let it bleed or the girl, thank u=) luv n light courtz.xoxo

OMG no hun...please do not consider it as your bestfriend. This really affected me and this poem made me cry. It is such an evil sickness. Ana does not care about you trust me, it is the worst backstabber in history...Listen, if you are really asking for help, PM me or get intouch with me. I would love to help you. My best friend died from ana. My real best friend. She friggin collapsed in the street one night...it's true. Till this day I am not over it. That night was in January. Please, be careful with yourself. Your writing skills are great and you are absolutely brilliant, but I really hope these thoughts you penned aren't really becoming your actions. Take care. 5/5

I hope you get through this ok. It made me cry this poem, that's for sure Look after yourself and i'm praying for you that you will get better soon. I hope you're ok :)

Another sad but excellent poem..
im gelous!
fkn awesome 5/5
much love
XxX
mary

I though it was really good .. the only thing i thought might be off was the rhyming scheme was a little off but other than that it was excellent 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*