Comments : The innocence of childhood

  • 18 years ago

    by Lilninja

    Nice poem...omg i'm in love with it. Very few people in this world dont feel the same but I do. It flows so good to. thanxs for that comment i got to. you r 4sure getting a 5/5 on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    :) that's nice.

    can u plz read 2 sided mirror (turning 13) pls?

    I had this scary dream about turning 13 and wut would happen. :) but i have to keep smiling

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Thnx for the comment. it's very inspiring :)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Great Great Great Message
    and poem
    Awesome Job

    and it wasnt dedicated to anyone
    its just what i felt..

    5/5 great job
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    No prob, girl..

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Girl..wut u mean by the comment, i didnt see anyone comment double...

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Ok i sent them a pm.

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    The man in the poem is kinda ... unexplainable... like a ghost or spirit... that's why i put it in the unexplained...

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Ok... pls enter this ... its on heartbreak.. i thought ud like it :)

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=50115

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Wonderful poem.....
    It is actually how a child sees the world.... and I can remember when i used to see it that way as well.... Life was pure and simple. =) Love the thoughts you put forward in this poem...! Great work!!!! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Hi.

    I've changed my name from Just Rain to HeartzOnIce... wanted a little change ;) so please don't take this stranger off your faves...

    :) thanks elnaz