This is a brillaint peice, very expressive and well written with clear content. self-harm is a terriable thing, i know who you feel about trying to stp others from going down that path, i'd like to make sure no one else ever makes some of the mistakes i have in the past, thouhg i usually cannot do much.

nyway, your poem is brilliantly writen and expressed with a smooth flow and unforced rhyme.

5/5

(in the 2nd line there is a slight typo which you may want to edit)

This is very expressive and well written. good job. 5/5

I agree. lots of emotions in this which are hard to get across so well done. i agree with everything in this poem.

you're poetry is amazing-i think you write about ana best..but that's just my opinion.

thanks for all my comments!

lonelynow xxx