Good......

Omg thats amzing hehe well done keep it up hun
xopxo emxoxo

Oh my...that's...that's really, really sad. Seriously, that's really sad. I feel an overwhelming sadness now. I feel really unhappy. : (. That's amazingly well written, Ben. And you can just tell you mean it; it's so sad. : (. *Hugs*. I hope you're alright doll, I know things will clear up eventually. Please take care. I love you dearly.

Much love,
- -SJG

A very good poem in my opinion ben. very dark and depressive. i could feel the passion within it. in fact, as i read on, i began to read slower and slower. that's what happened when i read, at certain points i read faster or slower, depending on the situation, but only with good writing. i loved the first two stanzas. i felt they flowed nicely. well, i shall speak to you soon. feel free to read some of mine, even some of the older ones if you want...or you could just not bother entirly, whatever suits you the best, lol.
see ya

Brad

Wow.... amazing xx